Nymphadora Tonks- remix

[Headmistress]

1.) The History section needs some work still. Her parents became the MYSTERY skate brand? What exactly does that mean? And she became the Nineties girl with the crazy hair and braces? This RPG doesn't even take place in the nineties.

2.) What did you mean by- "Also, I change my partners into things that they aren't during most classes. "

3.) You said in Good Personality Traits that she "likes to help entertain little kids", but then under KIDS, you said they are "very annoying."

Your understanding of this character doesn't seem to go very deep. I don't believe that Tonks would go around 'Toot Toot"ing herself, or calling Voldemort "Mr. Dark Lord".

Don't get me wrong, there are a great deal of things in this application that I liked. There are just a lot of things that seem very un-canon. You can try looking at the already Accepted applications for other characters, and maybe that will give you some idea of what I'm talking about.

This Application is not accepted, nor rejected. But please Modify the things I mentioned [Use the Modify button at the top of your post].

Thanks, and if you have any other questions, PM me or post below.

[Headmistress]

Excellent, just one more thing before I accept this.

"I hate my family, who's all around me, and I yell often and beat up sixth year brats who get in my way."

Tonks(who is a forth year according to this) beats up sixth years? Did you mean to say first years, maybe second years at most??

[Headmistress]

Righto.

I need a Roleplaying Example, it can be about anything. Just be sure and use good grammar and spelling.

Post it below.

[Emmeline Vance]

Tonks bumps into her pureblood cousin, Bellatrix Black.
Bella sneers at Tonks and mutters something close to "mudblood", and Tonks said "Excuse me?"
As the day progresses on, both Bella and Tonks end up in the hospital wing, with various cuts and scars, and so...
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[Narcissa Black]

You're God-Modding!

But I LOVE the picture. Absolutely LOVE it.

EDIT: Uhhh Tonk's mom is Andromeda... Andie is a 5th year... how is Tonks a fourth? She's not even born yet. I'm just curious if this was an oversight... I'm sad. I love Tonks!

[Headmistress]

Ahh, god dammit.

You know, It's been so long since I updated those characters... ahhh.

Alrighty, this character is just too out of Canon that I can't even make an exception. Sorry, but could you please choose a new character?


You know, I have this hunch that I know you, silvershiver... :]] *coughs*

[Emmeline Vance]

OKAY!
can i keep the pic?

[Headmistress]

Umm, so long as whoever you choose fits the picture, yes.

You can choose either Canon or Original, too.